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	<title>Comments on: Massive Bad Writing Starts Massive Story (by Albus)</title>
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		<title>By: james Harler</title>
		<link>http://antigobuzz.com/blogs/2008/12/16/massive-bad-writing-starts-massive-story-by-albus/comment-page-1/#comment-12401</link>
		<dc:creator>james Harler</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sat, 18 Jul 2009 07:01:11 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Concerning the double print of an obituary, My grandmothers was printed in February, twice, The frist one from the Funeral home, and the second one was paid by the family.  My grandparents knew many people and they thought it was ok to  print it twice?  Im not sure, but I think Freddy Screwed up the wording in it and left some stuff out also. Thanks a lot Fred. I think you&#039;d better find a replacement soon!!</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Concerning the double print of an obituary, My grandmothers was printed in February, twice, The frist one from the Funeral home, and the second one was paid by the family.  My grandparents knew many people and they thought it was ok to  print it twice?  Im not sure, but I think Freddy Screwed up the wording in it and left some stuff out also. Thanks a lot Fred. I think you&#8217;d better find a replacement soon!!</p>
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		<title>By: Albus</title>
		<link>http://antigobuzz.com/blogs/2008/12/16/massive-bad-writing-starts-massive-story-by-albus/comment-page-1/#comment-9758</link>
		<dc:creator>Albus</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 26 Feb 2009 20:13:54 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Sherry, I&#039;ve had some interactions with the individuals you mentioned. Averse as I am to personal attacks (I prefer to limit attacks to behaviors rather than persons), I&#039;m afraid I have to agree with you. The &quot;I&#039;m right, you&#039;re wrong. Now, what&#039;s YOUR problem?&quot; approach they take to dealing with points of contention leaves much to be desired as a mode of social conduct. You raise an interesting point regarding location. It&#039;s amusing (and encouraging!) to contemplate the consequences of their living in New York while we stay in Antigo.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Sherry, I&#8217;ve had some interactions with the individuals you mentioned. Averse as I am to personal attacks (I prefer to limit attacks to behaviors rather than persons), I&#8217;m afraid I have to agree with you. The &#8220;I&#8217;m right, you&#8217;re wrong. Now, what&#8217;s YOUR problem?&#8221; approach they take to dealing with points of contention leaves much to be desired as a mode of social conduct. You raise an interesting point regarding location. It&#8217;s amusing (and encouraging!) to contemplate the consequences of their living in New York while we stay in Antigo.</p>
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		<title>By: Sherry</title>
		<link>http://antigobuzz.com/blogs/2008/12/16/massive-bad-writing-starts-massive-story-by-albus/comment-page-1/#comment-9757</link>
		<dc:creator>Sherry</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 26 Feb 2009 17:00:20 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>I used to be the biggest fan of the ADJ, still am as far as reading it when I can...but am very disappointed in what I hear in the community about their staff, mainly Fred Berner &amp; Lisa Haefs. These &quot;journalists&quot; are the absolute snootiest two people I have ever met in their line of work and it must be the small-town excuse that they are better than anyone else who live here. I have met some wonderful media people involved in TV, radio and other newspapers and can&#039;t compare them to these unfriendly two. If it wasn&#039;t for all of us, THEY wouldn&#039;t even have a job so maybe they need to come down off of their high horses and realize that we live in Antigo, Wisconsin...not New York City!</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I used to be the biggest fan of the ADJ, still am as far as reading it when I can&#8230;but am very disappointed in what I hear in the community about their staff, mainly Fred Berner &amp; Lisa Haefs. These &#8220;journalists&#8221; are the absolute snootiest two people I have ever met in their line of work and it must be the small-town excuse that they are better than anyone else who live here. I have met some wonderful media people involved in TV, radio and other newspapers and can&#8217;t compare them to these unfriendly two. If it wasn&#8217;t for all of us, THEY wouldn&#8217;t even have a job so maybe they need to come down off of their high horses and realize that we live in Antigo, Wisconsin&#8230;not New York City!</p>
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		<title>By: Albus</title>
		<link>http://antigobuzz.com/blogs/2008/12/16/massive-bad-writing-starts-massive-story-by-albus/comment-page-1/#comment-9739</link>
		<dc:creator>Albus</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 25 Feb 2009 17:29:11 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>What REALLY makes it fun to read is story lead-ins like this from Feb 23, page 9:

&quot;The town of Langlade Fire Department held the second in a series of ice races at the Lily Snowbirds racetrack Saturday with an excellent turnout of drivers and a constant movement of fans during the day of events.&quot;

Beg pardon? &quot;...constant movement of fans...&quot;? What the hell is THAT supposed to mean? Maybe the fans were frozen to immobility at the first of the wintry &quot;series of ice races&quot;, so their ability to move this time is a newsworthy item. Or maybe the drivers race through the crowd, so fan movement is critical to the success of the race and reduction of injuries.

Or maybe it signals that the ADJ writers and editors need more constant movement of blood flow above the neck to provide a boost to oxygen-starved brain cells.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>What REALLY makes it fun to read is story lead-ins like this from Feb 23, page 9:</p>
<p>&#8220;The town of Langlade Fire Department held the second in a series of ice races at the Lily Snowbirds racetrack Saturday with an excellent turnout of drivers and a constant movement of fans during the day of events.&#8221;</p>
<p>Beg pardon? &#8220;&#8230;constant movement of fans&#8230;&#8221;? What the hell is THAT supposed to mean? Maybe the fans were frozen to immobility at the first of the wintry &#8220;series of ice races&#8221;, so their ability to move this time is a newsworthy item. Or maybe the drivers race through the crowd, so fan movement is critical to the success of the race and reduction of injuries.</p>
<p>Or maybe it signals that the ADJ writers and editors need more constant movement of blood flow above the neck to provide a boost to oxygen-starved brain cells.</p>
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		<title>By: ddddd</title>
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		<dc:creator>ddddd</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 25 Feb 2009 02:32:55 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>I love the Antigo Daily Journal. I grew up in a big city with a big city newspaper and well, the whole small town paper thing just seems so charming to me. In my hometown paper, you would never see stories about a local church supper, a little boy who caught a huge fish, or children caroling at a nursing home. I love &quot;Bits and Pieces, &quot;Hidden Places&quot; and &quot;Peeps At Our Past&quot; too. I think Fred is great! He knows everyone and obviously loves Antigo. In my opinion, it really shows in the paper and that&#039;s what makes it so fun to read.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I love the Antigo Daily Journal. I grew up in a big city with a big city newspaper and well, the whole small town paper thing just seems so charming to me. In my hometown paper, you would never see stories about a local church supper, a little boy who caught a huge fish, or children caroling at a nursing home. I love &#8220;Bits and Pieces, &#8220;Hidden Places&#8221; and &#8220;Peeps At Our Past&#8221; too. I think Fred is great! He knows everyone and obviously loves Antigo. In my opinion, it really shows in the paper and that&#8217;s what makes it so fun to read.</p>
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		<title>By: semperfi</title>
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		<dc:creator>semperfi</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 16 Feb 2009 15:11:51 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>i must endeavor from here on out to sequester a few more copies of this purported rag so that i might also be enlightened to the travesty of its mismanaged news and unethical print.  i must admit that i despise the layout of the bits and pieces column as it seems more like the sputterings of a failing mind before it ceases to spew forth anything comprehensible whatsoever.  i think the greatest flaw is hiring journalists on the pretense that a degree of any sort determines one&#039;s ability to write well despite a complete lack or originality or, as alluded to above, a thesaraus.  mr. burner seems to be a fantastic bussiness man as far as handling finances goes but directing a paper is an incredibly demanding task and i fear that perhaps it&#039;s not he himself who is always doing the final reviews on columns and layout.  considering the importance of such matters i cannot help but feel that i would, in his place, make that my priority for each and every issue.  how about a column for area amateurs there Fred?  you&#039;d be quite impressed how much writing talent exists in the area and you could find yourself with truly excellent stories about snowmobile trails (i don&#039;t do this myself but realize how big it is in this area), local self defense classes, dieting and nutrition, fishing hotspots, fashion tips, technology  and more.  speaking of technology, as much as it&#039;s a part of 98% of everyday life for the average citizen, why isn&#039;t there a technology column in the journal?  having worked as an editorialist in the past i know much about publications such as the journal and i see some large flaws in the layout.  Such as?  Why is it so difficult to find the current weather or movie show times?  Figure out what&#039;s relevant to your readers and prioritize that, even if you&#039;re not making a 10,000% increase in profit vs the 5,000% you&#039;re making now on a simple monochrome ad.  i&#039;m spouting fictitious numbers, please realize, but the point is the important factor and i believe i&#039;m finished making it.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>i must endeavor from here on out to sequester a few more copies of this purported rag so that i might also be enlightened to the travesty of its mismanaged news and unethical print.  i must admit that i despise the layout of the bits and pieces column as it seems more like the sputterings of a failing mind before it ceases to spew forth anything comprehensible whatsoever.  i think the greatest flaw is hiring journalists on the pretense that a degree of any sort determines one&#8217;s ability to write well despite a complete lack or originality or, as alluded to above, a thesaraus.  mr. burner seems to be a fantastic bussiness man as far as handling finances goes but directing a paper is an incredibly demanding task and i fear that perhaps it&#8217;s not he himself who is always doing the final reviews on columns and layout.  considering the importance of such matters i cannot help but feel that i would, in his place, make that my priority for each and every issue.  how about a column for area amateurs there Fred?  you&#8217;d be quite impressed how much writing talent exists in the area and you could find yourself with truly excellent stories about snowmobile trails (i don&#8217;t do this myself but realize how big it is in this area), local self defense classes, dieting and nutrition, fishing hotspots, fashion tips, technology  and more.  speaking of technology, as much as it&#8217;s a part of 98% of everyday life for the average citizen, why isn&#8217;t there a technology column in the journal?  having worked as an editorialist in the past i know much about publications such as the journal and i see some large flaws in the layout.  Such as?  Why is it so difficult to find the current weather or movie show times?  Figure out what&#8217;s relevant to your readers and prioritize that, even if you&#8217;re not making a 10,000% increase in profit vs the 5,000% you&#8217;re making now on a simple monochrome ad.  i&#8217;m spouting fictitious numbers, please realize, but the point is the important factor and i believe i&#8217;m finished making it.</p>
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		<title>By: Russ</title>
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		<dc:creator>Russ</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 11 Feb 2009 20:16:56 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>As for the obituaries - someone I know well who lost a loved one had that persons obituary put in like 3 times because ADJ kept messing it up.  Happens all the time and if you look closely, I am sure you could find the errors, etc.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>As for the obituaries &#8211; someone I know well who lost a loved one had that persons obituary put in like 3 times because ADJ kept messing it up.  Happens all the time and if you look closely, I am sure you could find the errors, etc.</p>
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		<title>By: Sherry</title>
		<link>http://antigobuzz.com/blogs/2008/12/16/massive-bad-writing-starts-massive-story-by-albus/comment-page-1/#comment-9463</link>
		<dc:creator>Sherry</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 11 Feb 2009 20:14:13 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>I also think that it&#039;s horrendous filling pages of the Antigo Daily Journal with delinquent property tax names. How important is it for family and friends of families struggling in the economy to know that someone they love is behind on their tax payments??? I think it&#039;s an outrage for Fred Berner to fill up his newspaper with such foolishness and unnecessary information. After all, it&#039;s supposed to be a newspaper...not a tabloid publication.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I also think that it&#8217;s horrendous filling pages of the Antigo Daily Journal with delinquent property tax names. How important is it for family and friends of families struggling in the economy to know that someone they love is behind on their tax payments??? I think it&#8217;s an outrage for Fred Berner to fill up his newspaper with such foolishness and unnecessary information. After all, it&#8217;s supposed to be a newspaper&#8230;not a tabloid publication.</p>
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		<title>By: Sherry</title>
		<link>http://antigobuzz.com/blogs/2008/12/16/massive-bad-writing-starts-massive-story-by-albus/comment-page-1/#comment-9462</link>
		<dc:creator>Sherry</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 11 Feb 2009 20:11:12 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>I would assume that happens when there has been an error printed in the first one or an omission of information...go figure!</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I would assume that happens when there has been an error printed in the first one or an omission of information&#8230;go figure!</p>
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		<title>By: Shalimar</title>
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		<dc:creator>Shalimar</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 11 Feb 2009 06:16:37 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Does anyone know why there will be an obituary in the ADJ &amp; then the next day same exact thing? I&#039;m not talking a notice, then the full obituary the next day. I&#039;m talking both days are entire obits. Why does this happen ??? Does Freddy just forget or is someone else who is responsible for obits hittin&#039; the sauce?</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Does anyone know why there will be an obituary in the ADJ &amp; then the next day same exact thing? I&#8217;m not talking a notice, then the full obituary the next day. I&#8217;m talking both days are entire obits. Why does this happen ??? Does Freddy just forget or is someone else who is responsible for obits hittin&#8217; the sauce?</p>
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